Several days ago I’ve read a gorgeous poem wrote by the beautiful Chimp from thelonelyauthorblog.wordpress.com. Its title: “I love you”. You can read it here. These are only few lines:
“without you my life’s tragic
cause you provide the magic
.
I loved it but I really didn’t know what to write to the comments. I was so upset because of this. I sat and I thought. But nothing. I read it again. And again. And after several minutes BOOM.
.
Because I’m a woman
I love your sweet words
Although is inhuman
For me to cross swords
❤
I love to be conquered
I love to be loved
But instead of swords
You can do it with words.
❤
Don’t love any duel
Life is enough cruel
Write me some words
Forget about swords
❤
My heart can be yours
Without fighting wars
No blood, wounds and swords
Just tell me the words!
by a Monica who lived
in an ancient time
Nicely done
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Monica, your poem is awesome! Sometimes I am so moved by something I read that I honestly don’t know how to put into words how that post effected me. I understand! There is a world of emotion that art evokes and sometimes putting words to that emotion is so difficult!! Thank you for this lovely Gift today!!! ❤
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I thank you, Amy, for read it and liked it. And most of all, thank you for being again Amy that I know. Welcome back again, dear friend ❤
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Aw, Monica. Bless you! My Journey was long and tough but now the stirrings of Life are again upon me. 🙂
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Bravo! Mon, do you hide a poet inside? Please let her get out…let her shine!
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I’m not so sure, Ann 🙂 It was the Chimp’s poem.
Thank you ❤
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Chimp, you mean Chimpanzee?
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Yes, Ann. It’s Thelonelyauthorblog’s character. He’s the Chimp :))
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Nice!
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Many thanks 🙂
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That was lovely, Monica! You should write more poetry! Who is in the photo?
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Thanks for your beautiful words, Rob.
In the photo are two idiots :)) I’ve told them not to duel and they did it anyway. So, I shot them 😀
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lol! You shot them? Wow, you are very, very strict! I will promise to not get you angry at me. 😉
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Hahaha!
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😉
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Nice
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Thank you, Lynz 🙂
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🙂
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Wow…It is really lovely, Monica.
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Thanks, Christopher. It was a moment of confusion :)) I’m not so good to english to write poetry. I do write, but only in Romanian.
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It worked well in English. 😊 We all have our moments of confusion, I think. 🤔 Cheers.
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🙂 Some candy for you 🍬 🍭 🍫
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Oh, thank you. I love sweets. 😃
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Beautiful. 🙂
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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A medieval touch Monica. Beautifully written. 🙂
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Oh, thank you. I am glad you liked it, Miriam. The Chimp’s poem makes me feel like that. I usually write poetry, but only in Romanian.
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Well you did a lovely job in English too.
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I hope. Using google translate is not always an option.
Have an amazing weekend, Miriam ❤
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You too Monica. Are you doing anything special?
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Saturday I’ll go with my father to a barbecue at my uncle. We will enjoy the spring. 🙂 And my cousins, of course 🙂 And after that my BFF, Catalina, will stay at me over the night and the next day.
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Sounds like it’ll be a lovely weekend, enjoy it all Monica. 🙂
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Thanks, Miriam. I will live it to the max! 😀
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Beautiful poem 🙂 I saw your comment there 🙂
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I know you have seen it. I added two more stanzas. I’m happy you liked it, Arohii
💋💐
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You are welcome, yep i noticed. Good one Monica, keep it up!! Loves as always xx
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Love and candy, Arohii
💕 ¸.•*´¯ 💕 and 🍬 🍭 🍫
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woohoo!! Candy, thanks dear ❤
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Lovely. Words indeed are the most important. Few understand this though 😦
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Thank you so much!
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That was beautiful! I love your writing!!
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Thank you very much 🙂
Sorry for my late answer, but I just found your comment in my spam box 😦
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wonderful
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Many thanks, Jim! I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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That’s so beautiful Monica. The people in the photo need to hear this one. There’s so much beauty in this poem. Loving it. Lots of love to you from my end on this one. 🙂
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(#^_^#) (Blushing) Thank you so much!
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I’m Smiling! 🙂 😉
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Wow.It’s a beautiful poem you composed. and the picture compliments equally.
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Many thanks, Mann 🙂
I’m glad you read it and liked it ❤
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Oh I like this in response to Andrew’s piece. Beautiful!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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You’re welcome! Have a nice weekend!
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You, tooooo! ❤
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Love this post!
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I am very happy 😉
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No need to fight…just use your words… beautiful, Monica!
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Lovely poem, Monica! You’re very inspirational 😀
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Thank you so much, Melissa 😀
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He who loves the spirit of a female can only truly love one; but he who loves her body, won’t be content with all the females in the world.
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I agree with you 🙂
Thank you for your words!
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Welcome
My Dear !
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😀
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Süper 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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its really beautiful … loved it so much …. love is so magical … ❤
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It is indeed. Glad you liked it 🙂
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Excellent response to Lonely’s poem
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Thank you very much, Derrick. I always appreciate your words ❤
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This is gorgeous, Monica 🙂 . I love the way you express your ideas with heart.
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I’m glad you liked it, Laine. Let’s say it was a moment of inspiration. Of course, after another moment of lack of inspiration. Thank you for your kind words and for your support
Hugs ❤
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Wowwww…its awesome..you are too good at it 🙂
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Aww… That’s very sweet of you to say that! 😀
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Ar trebui sa te pui serios pe scris poezii. Chiar te pricepi!
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Multumesc frumos. Ma bucur ca ti-a placut. Dar, la noi in familie tata e poetul. Eu mai mult cu proza. :))
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Beautiful poem, with lot of meaning in it.
Words is what makes you fall in love, but there are only few of “Monica” kind. So then “Monica” is special.
Because every body else want to end up fighting all the time with/out any reasons.
First line – because I am a woman – blows the mind off.
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That’s so kind of you to say that. 🙂 Thank you very much! I am glad you liked it.
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This one is just taking off!
Haha love the kiss!
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Glad you liked it 😀
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Very good. You sure you are not one hundred and seventeen? 😉
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I think you do kick-boxing. Have you ever tried fencing?
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Wonderful poem Monica. You’re writing extemporized poetry just like me ! Happy to see a fellow poet letting their emotions flow into poetic form straight from the heart ! Cheers 🙂
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I am happy you liked it, but this poem is a rarity. I am not a poet. I write poetry rarely. I like to do it, but I am not too good 🙂
Thank you so much for your words!
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I think you should write poetry more often, I believe you have it in you just like your grandfather 👌😊
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Maybe… I will try 🙂
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👌😊
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Hi
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Hi 🙂
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This is awesomeness in words. I could relate to it. 😍😍😍😍
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I’m glad you could relate to it. 😀
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Monica! ❤ ❤ ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Excellent !
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Hey! Many thanks 🙂
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Wow, nicely worded!
Great job 🙂
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Aww… Thank you very much 🙂
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